Opposite to My Fear (08.22.10)

Every minute passed, is yet another hour
Hence it tracks my loss of power
Because without your presence near
Your sweet angelic face, my dear
The ghost-like moving memories
Play like loving enemies
And the lyrics of an old sad song
Remind me of what feels so long
The time between our tales and talks
Our hand-in-hand heavenly walks
All of this is due to you, my dear
You are the opposite to my fear
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11 thoughts on “Opposite to My Fear (08.22.10)

  1. Chloe says:

    “The ghost-like moving memories, Play like loving enemies”

    Wow – you use such amazing imagery in your poetry! And you express love so beautifully here. Looking forward to reading more my friend!

    • Sean says:

      🙂 Thank you so much. I really appreciate your feedback. Sometimes it’s easy to express this love because it’s so right and so true with this person I’m with. True love really does inspire great things!

      • Chloe says:

        I’m SOooo happy for you. Yes, true love does inspire great things doesn’t it?? 😀 xx

  2. Jingle says:

    your words are divine here…
    love your beautiful imaginations…

  3. tasithoughts says:

    Very heartfelt and your words transcends into feelings that emote out to the reader real truth. Well done!

  4. buttercup600 says:

    I felt every word you wrote, it is amazing what comes from the heart when you love. Well done x

  5. siubhan says:

    such sweet longing here; light and lyrical. nice.

  6. wondrinsoul says:

    i could almost hear this being sung as i read it. loved the way your words flowed together!

    • Sean says:

      Thank you all for the kind remarks. I’ve never gotten so much great feedback on my poetry before. I’ll be sure to check out all of your blogs as soon as I can! 🙂

  7. Jingle says:

    Great to hear from u the other day,
    please at least visit poets back to appreciate their encouragement here,

    Happy Friday!

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/happy-birthday-2-lisa-plus-happy-belated/
    a butterfly award for you.
    😉

  8. Kaylyn says:

    I came, I read this article, I conrueqed.

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